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Agghhh!!!!!! Loki screamed in pain. Thor hit Loki again with the hammer. Thor! Please stop! Loki cried. Grrrrrr....Thor growled. please Thor...Loki started. Then Thor hit him again.
What..What did i ever do wrong? Loki asked. Everything! Thor yelled. But I...Loki hesitated. You what?! Thor yelled. I really care about you Thor and I- Loki got cut off by Thor's fist to his face. Ahhh!!! Loki screamed in pain again. Please..Thor just tell me what i did wrong and I'll fix i- aaaaaaaaghhhh!!!!!! Loki yelled. Loki was bleeding. Thor abuses him when he's pissed off. Thor....Loki cried.
(meanwhile) Mmm this is good! Thor said. Ya ya we get it...You've been saying that a million times now. Loki said. I cant help it! It's so delicious! Thor said. Thor...Loki said. Yes baby brother? D-dont call me that! Loki said. But you are my baby bro- Thor got cut off my Loki's hand to his mouth. Jeez, be quiet..We're in public Thor...Please dont embarrass me...Loki said. Im sorry, i never meant to embarrass you. Thor said. Apology accepted. Loki said. Thor smiles.   (meanwhile) T-Thor you dont understand please just let me- Loki tried to speak. Thor hits Loki again. AAghh!!! Loki screamed in pain. Tears fall down Loki's face. Please..Thor..I love you...Why must you do this? Loki asked. Because I hate you! Thor yelled. He smashed Loki again. Loki started sobbing. Why do you hate me? I never did anything to you! Loki yelled in sobs. Dont raise you voice at me! Thor yelled. Thor grabs Loki's throat and chokes him. Ah ah, Thor...I -coughs- Please...Loki sobbed.  Thor smashed him again. Loki tried to crawl away but Thor smashed his leg with his hammer. AAAAAAAGH!!!!!!!! Loki screamed. (meanwhile) Thor hugs Loki. Th-Thor......Loki said. Yes brother? Thor asked. Let go of- I love you. Loki said. Loki hugs Thor back. I love you too brother. Thor said. Really guys? You have to do this now? Tony asked. Wha- Loki was shocked. Well excuse me if i love my brother! Thor said. Loki started blushing of embarrasment. I..I'll be right back. Loki said. Loki leaves the room. See what you did?! Thor said to Tony. Thor follows Loki. Loki..Thor said. Yes? Loki asked. You ok? Thor asked Y-yea im fine. Loki said. Thor hugs Loki. I dont know what's wrong with him...But he can be pretty stupid sometimes. Thor said. Yea..I know, I just...Loki said. Want some pudding? Thor asked. Loki nodded. Ok come on! Thor said. (meanwhile) Loki feels like he's gonna die. Thor smashes Loki one more time. Loki coughs blood. Thor leaves the room. Loki feel numb. Why brother why??? Loki thought. (meanwhile) Gosh i love pudding! Loki said. Thor sits by Loki. Loki, guess what? Thor asked. What? Loki asked. Thor puts a whole bowl of pudding in his face. ahahahahh!!!! Thor laughed. Your gonna regret that! Loki said playfully. Loki grabs a pie. O_O nuu!!! that's my favorite! Thor said. Muahahahhaha!!!!!! Loki laughed evilly. Loki eats the pie. O_O my pie!!! Thor yelled. Muahahahahhah!!!!! Loki laughs evilly again. oh ya? Thor asked. Ya! Loki said. well...Thor said, looking around. Well what? Thor grabs pudding and eats it. Loki gasps. Loki grabs a poptart and eats it. O_O_O_O_O_O__O_O_O_O_ nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thor yelled. Yesssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!! Loki yelled. (meanwhile) Loki is in the healing room getting healed. Thor comes in the room. Loki wakes up and sees Thor. How are you getting healed?! Thor yelled. I...I dont know. Loki said. Thor grabs Loki's throat and throws him at a wall. Agh! I always loved you! What's the reason that you hate me!??! Loki cried. You were born a monster that's what! Thor yelled. Tears falls down Loki's face. So..you hate me because of what I am? Loki asked, hurt. Yes! Thor yelled. Loki's heart-broken. Loki cries. Stop crying you little baby! Thor yelled. NO i wont! Cause you hate me! And i have no where else to go! Loki yelled. Thor knocks Loki out. (meanwhile) uhhh....Im so tired..Loki said. Me too...Thor said. Loki crawls up by Thor and lays his head on his chest. Thor plays with Loki's hair. Loki falls asleep. (meanwhile) Blood is all over the place from Thor hurting Loki. Loki is in so much pain and dosent understand why Thor hates him. Loki goes up behind Thor and hugs him. I love you Thor. Loki said. Grrrr what i have told you?!! Thor yelled. What? You didnt tell me anything. Loki said. Thor hits Loki's head with the hammer. Why do you hate me so much?!!??!!?!? Loki screamed. Shut up! Thor yelled. I tell you i love you and you hit me! Loki yelled. I said shut up!! Thor yelled. I try to show you affection but all you do is hate me!!! Loki yelled. Shut the hell up!!!!!!! Thor yelled. Does it even matter if im a frost giant or not?! Loki asked. I told you to shut up! Thor yelled. Thor hits Loki with the hammer. (meanwhile) Thor! That was uncool! Loki yelled. It was? Thor asked. Yes! You put the pudding with the pies! No one does that! Loki said. They dont? Thor asked. Nope. Loki said. Well then....I'll eat all the pudding then. Thor said. W_O_O_foijgmjvn Fine!!!! But im going to see the movie Avengers! Loki said. OO_O_O_O_O_O can i come? Thor asked. Do you want to? Loki asked.  yes! Thor said. Put down the pudding then and come on! Loki said. (meanwhile) You used to love me Thor! What happened?!?!? Loki cried. You! Thor yelled. That dosent make sense! Loki yelled. Ever since he brought you home i hated you! But i had to act like i loved you! Now that he's dead i get to do what i want now! Thor yelled. You..you hated me ever since i was..Loki hesitated. Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thor screamed. Loki runs away crying. Come back here! Thor screamed. No!!! Get away from me!!! You monster!!! Loki cried. (meanwhile) Thor was waiting for Loki. Then he saw Loki running and crying. Loki! Thor yelled. Thor follows Loki. When Thor got there he saw Loki on the ground unconcious. Damn it! Thor swore. Thor takes Loki to the hospital. Is he gonna be ok? Thor asks the doctor. Yes but he is very wounded. The doctor said. Who could've done this? Thor thought to himself. Thor turns and sees Loki. I was gone only for a few minutes and you replace me? Loki asked, tearing up. No Loki i thought- Thor got cut off. I thought you loved me! Loki cried. Loki started to leave. Loki wait! Thor said. What? Are you now gonna tell me you hate me? Loki asked. Loki runs away. Loki................Thor said. (meanwhile) Loki is sobbing then runs into someone. What the hell?!!!?!? That person swore. What? Loki wondered. Thor? Loki asked. He sees the person and it's Thor. Why are you following me? Cant you leave me alone!?!??!?!! Loki screamed. Thor grabs Loki's throat. Thor what are you doing? Loki asked. Thor throws Loki into the wall. Agh! Thor what...what are you d-doing? Loki asked. Finishing the job. Thor said. Job? what job? Loki asked. Thor smashes Loki. Loki screamed in pain. (meanwhile) Thor hears Loki scream. His eye widen. Im coming Loki! Thor yelled. (meanwhile) You were so soft...Now your hateful and mean........Loki said. Oh, i was never so soft!!!!!!!!! Thor yelled. Thor was about to smash Loki again until lightning hit him. NO one lays a finger on my brother! Someone yelled. W-what? Loki is confused. Thor ran to his side. Are You OK? Thor asked. What? Th-Thor I...Loki started. Shhh, i know. Thor said. How dare you?! The mean Thor said. How dare I? You hurt my brother! That's how i dare! Thor yelled. You wanna battle eh?! The mean Thor yelled. Yeah! For hurting my brother!  Thor yelled. Thor.....Loki said. Yes brother? Thor asked. Please...dont fight....Loki said. What? But he...Thor started. Y-You'll get hurt.......Loki said. No i wont I..Thor tried to talk but Loki cut him off. Your fighting against yourself, Thor. Can you not see that? Loki asked. Your right....Thor said. Are you gonna fight me or not!?!? The mean Thor said. No im not. Thor said. First you agreed now you chicken out?!? The mean Thor yelled. No, the avengers will. Someone said. Thor looks to see who it was and it was the other avengers. Guys? Your here. Thor said. Of course we are, we arent gonna let one of our friends get hurt. Steve said. Thank you...Thor said. You better take Loki to the hospital. Tony said. Thor nods. wait! Thor said. What? Tony said. What about you guys? Thor asked. We'll fight him off now go. Tony said. But- Thor got cut off. Go! Tony said. Fine. Thor said. Thor picks Loki up and flies away with his hammer. Well that's settled. Steve said. Hulk smash bad hammer!! Hulk said. Ya! Smash him hulk! Clint said. (meanwhile) Im so sorry Loki.....Thor said. Why?????? Loki said. Because this is my fault that this happened to and......Im sorry..Thor said. No it wasnt......Loki said. But I........Thor tried to say. Loki tries to get but Thor pushes him down. You have to lay there Loki. Thor said. But.....Loki started. Listen to me and listen well your hurt and i dont want you to get hurt even more. Thor said. That's all? Loki asked. Yes. Thor said. Well....That's stupid. Loki said. o_O Is not! Thor said. Is too. Loki said. Prove it! Thor said. H-how? Loki asked. Thor hugs Loki. Thor! That's not fair! Loki said. How is it stupid Loki? Thor asked. I-it just is! Loki said. How? Thor asked. Well..Because your an oaf and your words are....Loki got cut off. Uncool brother! Uncool! Thor said. Loki giggles. You think that's funny huh? Thor asked. Loki nodded. Thor starts tickling Loki. Aahhahahahaha!!!! Thor stop it!! Loki laughed. They hear explosions. Loki looks at Thor. Arent you gonna help them? Loki asked. Are you sure? Thor asked. Are you or not?!? Loki asked. Thor hugs Loki. I'll be right back. Thor said. (meanwhile) Hulk hits mean Thor again. Oof! What trickery is this?! The mean Thor yelled. It's no trick. Steve said. Im here. Thor said. Your brother's ok? Steve asked. Yes. Thor said. OK good. Steve said. Stop! Someone yelled. The person ran to the bad Thor. What? Loki???!?!? Steve was confused. Not my Loki a different Loki. Thor said. oh ok. Steve said. Dont hurt him...Loki whined. Have you learned nothing?! The mean Thor yelled at him. Loki whimpered. Hey! You dont treat you brother like that! Steve said. Pff he's not my brother, he's a monster. The mean Thor said. But he loves you! Cant you see!? He didnt want you to die! Steve yelled. SO?! The mean Thor yelled. He loves you and cares about you! And all you do is hurt him!? What does that do for you!? Steve yelled. The mean Thor felt guilty. I....The mean Thor didnt know what to say. You should feel guilty for doing it to him, he loves you. Steve said. I..I...The mean Thor hesitated. making someone suffer dosent gain you anything. Thor said. I just..I...The mean Thor felt horrible. Loki caught up to Thor. Your...-pants- too.....-pants-...fast...Loki said between pants. What? Loki what are you doing here? Thor asked. To help you duh. Loki said. Thor puts his arm around Loki. I dont need help. Thor said. What???? So i followed you for nothing? Loki asked. Yep. Thor said. Man............Loki said. That's the kind of love we're talking about. Steve said while pointing at Thor and Loki. Sometimes it's disgusting. Tony said. Dude! Im giving him an example! Steve said. But cant you do something less romantic? O_O_O_O_O__O_OO_O_O_O_O_O_O_O your calling them gay/!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?? Steve asked. No of course not. Tony said. I..Im sorry Loki...The mean Thor said to his brother. Thor I...He tried to speak. No i mean it Loki, i hurt you, made you suffer, left you for dead, and more horrible things, and im sorry. The mean Thor said.
Mmm this is good! Thor said. Ya ya we get it...You've been saying that a million times now. Loki said. I cant help it! It's so delicious! Thor said. Thor...Loki said. Yes baby brother? D-dont call me that! Loki said. But you are my baby bro- Thor got cut off my Loki's hand to his mouth. Jeez, be quiet..We're in public Thor...Please dont embarrass me...Loki said. Im sorry, i never meant to embarrass you. Thor said. Apology accepted. Loki said. Thor smiles.  
(meanwhile)
T-Thor you dont understand please just let me- Loki tried to speak. Thor hits Loki again. AAghh!!! Loki screamed in pain. Tears fall down Loki's face. Please..Thor..I love you...Why must you do this? Loki asked. Because I hate you! Thor yelled. He smashed Loki again. Loki started sobbing. Why do you hate me? I never did anything to you! Loki yelled in sobs. Dont raise you voice at me! Thor yelled. Thor grabs Loki's throat and chokes him. Ah ah, Thor...I -coughs- Please...Loki sobbed.  Thor smashed him again. Loki tried to crawl away but Thor smashed his leg with his hammer. AAAAAAAGH!!!!!!!! Loki screamed.
(meanwhile)
Thor hugs Loki. Th-Thor......Loki said. Yes brother? Thor asked. Let go of- I love you. Loki said. Loki hugs Thor back. I love you too brother. Thor said. Really guys? You have to do this now? Tony asked. Wha- Loki was shocked. Well excuse me if i love my brother! Thor said. Loki started blushing of embarrasment. I..I'll be right back. Loki said. Loki leaves the room. See what you did?! Thor said to Tony. Thor follows Loki. Loki..Thor said. Yes? Loki asked. You ok? Thor asked Y-yea im fine. Loki said. Thor hugs Loki. I dont know what's wrong with him...But he can be pretty stupid sometimes. Thor said. Yea..I know, I just...Loki said. Want some pudding? Thor asked. Loki nodded. Ok come on! Thor said.
(meanwhile)
Loki feels like he's gonna die. Thor smashes Loki one more time. Loki coughs blood. Thor leaves the room. Loki feel numb. Why brother why??? Loki thought.
(meanwhile)
Gosh i love pudding! Loki said. Thor sits by Loki. Loki, guess what? Thor asked. What? Loki asked. Thor puts a whole bowl of pudding in his face. ahahahahh!!!! Thor laughed. Your gonna regret that! Loki said playfully. Loki grabs a pie. O_O nuu!!! that's my favorite! Thor said. Muahahahhaha!!!!!! Loki laughed evilly. Loki eats the pie. O_O my pie!!! Thor yelled. Muahahahahhah!!!!! Loki laughs evilly again. oh ya? Thor asked. Ya! Loki said. well...Thor said, looking around. Well what? Thor grabs pudding and eats it. Loki gasps. Loki grabs a poptart and eats it. O_O_O_O_O_O__O_O_O_O_ nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thor yelled. Yesssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!! Loki yelled.
(meanwhile)
Loki is in the healing room getting healed. Thor comes in the room. Loki wakes up and sees Thor. How are you getting healed?! Thor yelled. I...I dont know. Loki said. Thor grabs Loki's throat and throws him at a wall. Agh! I always loved you! What's the reason that you hate me!??! Loki cried. You were born a monster that's what! Thor yelled. Tears falls down Loki's face. So..you hate me because of what I am? Loki asked, hurt. Yes! Thor yelled. Loki's heart-broken. Loki cries. Stop crying you little baby! Thor yelled. NO i wont! Cause you hate me! And i have no where else to go! Loki yelled. Thor knocks Loki out.
(meanwhile)
uhhh....Im so tired..Loki said. Me too...Thor said. Loki crawls up by Thor and lays his head on his chest. Thor plays with Loki's hair. Loki falls asleep.
(meanwhile)
Blood is all over the place from Thor hurting Loki. Loki is in so much pain and dosent understand why Thor hates him. Loki goes up behind Thor and hugs him. I love you Thor. Loki said. Grrrr what i have told you?!! Thor yelled. What? You didnt tell me anything. Loki said. Thor hits Loki's head with the hammer. Why do you hate me so much?!!??!!?!? Loki screamed. Shut up! Thor yelled. I tell you i love you and you hit me! Loki yelled. I said shut up!! Thor yelled. I try to show you affection but all you do is hate me!!! Loki yelled. Shut the hell up!!!!!!! Thor yelled. Does it even matter if im a frost giant or not?! Loki asked. I told you to shut up! Thor yelled. Thor hits Loki with the hammer.
(meanwhile)
Thor! That was uncool! Loki yelled. It was? Thor asked. Yes! You put the pudding with the pies! No one does that! Loki said. They dont? Thor asked. Nope. Loki said. Well then....I'll eat all the pudding then. Thor said. W_O_O_foijgmjvn Fine!!!! But im going to see the movie Avengers! Loki said. OO_O_O_O_O_O can i come? Thor asked. Do you want to? Loki asked.  yes! Thor said. Put down the pudding then and come on! Loki said.
(meanwhile)
You used to love me Thor! What happened?!?!? Loki cried. You! Thor yelled. That dosent make sense! Loki yelled. Ever since he brought you home i hated you! But i had to act like i loved you! Now that he's dead i get to do what i want now! Thor yelled. You..you hated me ever since i was..Loki hesitated. Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thor screamed. Loki runs away crying. Come back here! Thor screamed. No!!! Get away from me!!! You monster!!! Loki cried.
(meanwhile)
Thor was waiting for Loki. Then he saw Loki running and crying. Loki! Thor yelled. Thor follows Loki. When Thor got there he saw Loki on the ground unconcious. Damn it! Thor swore. Thor takes Loki to the hospital. Is he gonna be ok? Thor asks the doctor. Yes but he is very wounded. The doctor said. Who could've done this? Thor thought to himself. Thor turns and sees Loki. I was gone only for a few minutes and you replace me? Loki asked, tearing up. No Loki i thought- Thor got cut off. I thought you loved me! Loki cried. Loki started to leave. Loki wait! Thor said. What? Are you now gonna tell me you hate me? Loki asked. Loki runs away. Loki................Thor said.
(meanwhile)
Loki is sobbing then runs into someone. What the hell?!!!?!? That person swore. What? Loki wondered. Thor? Loki asked. He sees the person and it's Thor. Why are you following me? Cant you leave me alone!?!??!?!! Loki screamed. Thor grabs Loki's throat. Thor what are you doing? Loki asked. Thor throws Loki into the wall. Agh! Thor what...what are you d-doing? Loki asked. Finishing the job. Thor said. Job? what job? Loki asked. Thor smashes Loki. Loki screamed in pain.
(meanwhile)
Thor hears Loki scream. His eye widen. Im coming Loki! Thor yelled.
(meanwhile)
You were so soft...Now your hateful and mean........Loki said. Oh, i was never so soft!!!!!!!!! Thor yelled. Thor was about to smash Loki again until lightning hit him. NO one lays a finger on my brother! Someone yelled. W-what? Loki is confused. Thor ran to his side. Are You OK? Thor asked. What? Th-Thor I...Loki started. Shhh, i know. Thor said.
How dare you?! The mean Thor said. How dare I? You hurt my brother! That's how i dare! Thor yelled. You wanna battle eh?! The mean Thor yelled. Yeah! For hurting my brother!  Thor yelled. Thor.....Loki said. Yes brother? Thor asked. Please...dont fight....Loki said. What? But he...Thor started. Y-You'll get hurt.......Loki said. No i wont I..Thor tried to talk but Loki cut him off. Your fighting against yourself, Thor. Can you not see that? Loki asked. Your right....Thor said. Are you gonna fight me or not!?!? The mean Thor said. No im not. Thor said. First you agreed now you chicken out?!? The mean Thor yelled. No, the avengers will. Someone said. Thor looks to see who it was and it was the other avengers. Guys? Your here. Thor said. Of course we are, we arent gonna let one of our friends get hurt. Steve said. Thank you...Thor said. You better take Loki to the hospital. Tony said. Thor nods. wait! Thor said. What? Tony said. What about you guys? Thor asked. We'll fight him off now go. Tony said. But- Thor got cut off. Go! Tony said. Fine. Thor said. Thor picks Loki up and flies away with his hammer. Well that's settled. Steve said. Hulk smash bad hammer!! Hulk said. Ya! Smash him hulk! Clint said.
(meanwhile)
Im so sorry Loki.....Thor said. Why?????? Loki said. Because this is my fault that this happened to and......Im sorry..Thor said. No it wasnt......Loki said. But I........Thor tried to say. Loki tries to get but Thor pushes him down. You have to lay there Loki. Thor said. But.....Loki started. Listen to me and listen well your hurt and i dont want you to get hurt even more. Thor said. That's all? Loki asked. Yes. Thor said. Well....That's stupid. Loki said. o_O Is not! Thor said. Is too. Loki said. Prove it! Thor said. H-how? Loki asked. Thor hugs Loki. Thor! That's not fair! Loki said. How is it stupid Loki? Thor asked. I-it just is! Loki said. How? Thor asked. Well..Because your an oaf and your words are....Loki got cut off. Uncool brother! Uncool! Thor said. Loki giggles. You think that's funny huh? Thor asked. Loki nodded. Thor starts tickling Loki. Aahhahahahaha!!!! Thor stop it!! Loki laughed. They hear explosions. Loki looks at Thor. Arent you gonna help them? Loki asked. Are you sure? Thor asked. Are you or not?!? Loki asked. Thor hugs Loki. I'll be right back. Thor said.
(meanwhile)
Hulk hits mean Thor again. Oof! What trickery is this?! The mean Thor yelled. It's no trick. Steve said. Im here. Thor said. Your brother's ok? Steve asked. Yes. Thor said.
OK good. Steve said. Stop! Someone yelled. The person ran to the bad Thor. What? Loki???!?!? Steve was confused. Not my Loki a different Loki. Thor said. oh ok. Steve said. Dont hurt him...Loki whined. Have you learned nothing?! The mean Thor yelled at him. Loki whimpered. Hey! You dont treat you brother like that! Steve said. Pff he's not my brother, he's a monster. The mean Thor said. But he loves you! Cant you see!? He didnt want you to die! Steve yelled. SO?! The mean Thor yelled. He loves you and cares about you! And all you do is hurt him!? What does that do for you!? Steve yelled. The mean Thor felt guilty. I....The mean Thor didnt know what to say. You should feel guilty for doing it to him, he loves you. Steve said. I..I...The mean Thor hesitated. making someone suffer dosent gain you anything. Thor said. I just..I...The mean Thor felt horrible. Loki caught up to Thor. Your...-pants- too.....-pants-...fast...Loki said between pants. What? Loki what are you doing here? Thor asked. To help you duh. Loki said. Thor puts his arm around Loki. I dont need help. Thor said. What???? So i followed you for nothing? Loki asked. Yep. Thor said. Man............Loki said. That's the kind of love we're talking about. Steve said while pointing at Thor and Loki. Sometimes it's disgusting. Tony said. Dude! Im giving him an example! Steve said. But cant you do something less romantic? O_O_O_O_O__O_OO_O_O_O_O_O_O_O your calling them gay/!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?? Steve asked. No of course not. Tony said. I..Im sorry Loki...The mean Thor said to his brother. Thor I...He tried to speak. No i mean it Loki, i hurt you, made you suffer, left you for dead, and more horrible things, and im sorry. The mean Thor said. I..Im fine. The other Loki said. No your not. The other Thor said. he hugs his brother. Everyone cries except for Thor and Loki. Come on lets go rule asgard together. He said. The other Loki smiled. I love you. The other Loki said. I love you too. The other Thor said. Lets go home. He said.

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rhonda1998's avatar
OMG...NOOOO!!! WHY THOR!? WHY!